LB Reenactment

Posted in The Lost Boys with tags , , , , , , , , , on August 31, 2011 by markolvr

http://www.welcometocalifornia.co.uk/#/lostboys/trailer

Hey all you Santa Carla citizens, I know I posted something about this already but I’m posting a link to the main page now. Those of you who might live in the UK may already know about the reenactment of the Lost Boys and Top Gun movies. Actually it sounds more like they’re setting up scenes from the movie and putting people into groups for a viewing of the two. LB fans will be put with David, Edgar, Star and some surfer from the Nazi side. But for all you fan fic writers working late at night or early in the morning hours before the sun shows its hot head, hahaha, this is a great site to pull up for the radio station alone. I don’t know how long they’ll keep it up, but right as we speak they’re playing the Wave Jammer full of awesome 80′s tunes that include a few from the movie itself. Plus, special guests are arriving at any time. You never know when one of the boys may appear! They even have a few commercials related to the movie, including one for Video Max.

It’s a great back drop for those of us working hard on our fics. It sets the scene so well. So have fun, and keep rockin’ out in the night!

For some reason this stupid page won’t let me put the actual link in. In fact it won’t let me put any links in right now and I’m not sure why. So for those of you who are interested, I guess you’ll just have to copy and paste the link. I’m sorry.

Adult fanfiction review

Posted in Troubles & Issues with tags , , , , , on August 25, 2011 by markolvr

Quite awhile ago I started to post my very first LB fanfic (Destination Unknown) on the adult fanfic site, but I ended up stopping at chapter three because I’ve got it posted everywhere else. Not only that but it doesn’t get a lot of hits over there. I’ve only received one review for it so far. Well tonight I found another review in the spam folder of my email. It wasn’t a very nice one, but it made me laugh a little. This person stated that my OC was the worst offending Mary Sue she had ever read in the LB world and that at least I made it obvious in the description of the story.

I admit, now that I read back over the story itself I see things that are a little cheesy, but I honestly have never considered Serenity to be a Mary Sue. In fact I’m pretty sure she’s not. I’ve even had other readers confirm this thought. Although she may have a few traits similar to one, I still don’t consider her to be offending. I just thought I would share that with you guys. I think it’s the first bad review I’ve ever gotten. And by saying that I’m not stating my writing is perfect, I know it’s not. I’ve just never gotten an offending comment like that before. It is really funny.

Ugg, and I’m going to stop there. It’s late, I have to take a shower and hit the hay.

Lost Boys live action what?

Posted in The Lost Boys with tags , , , , , , , , , on August 22, 2011 by markolvr

A friend of mine posted this on Facebook yesterday and I tried to look at it but naturally, my computer froze up on me. I got a look at it today and apparently they’re setting this up somewhere in London to take place on Sept 3rd. It’s a live action party where you can join the Frog brothers in the hunt to stop the big bad that’s around Santa Carla or join one of the street gangs. However, there is a link at the end of the main page that takes you to some sort of interactive online type of deal. Right now the only thing that seems to work is the music. I’m not exactly sure how it’s going to work, but I have a feeling I might be poking around in there to make sure Marko’s manhood remains in tact.

Could be fun I suppose, but like I said, I’m not sure how it will work, especially if word gets out. Will there be people fighting over characters or will they just let ten Davids be created? Take a look and tell me what you think.

The Lost Boys live

Marko issues

Posted in Troubles & Issues with tags , , , , , , , on August 15, 2011 by markolvr

Well, I was excited to have some writing time today as I did last Monday, and I got about half of the next chapter done for ‘Becoming the Night’ but then decided to rewrite it because Dwayne had a part that wouldn’t leave my mind. However, now that I’m at the scene where Marko makes his first kill, I’m having a rather difficult time getting into his head. He’s weak at the moment in the story because dawn is fast approaching and he hasn’t fed, obviously, plus he’s had I don’t know how many shots of whiskey, haha. I’m debating on whether or not he would just go for it or need some egging to do it. Not only that but I’m not sure I like the atmosphere of the scene. I want it to be kick ass in Marko’s style, but for some reason I can’t seem to drag him away from the alley of the bar!

Anyone have any ideas? I don’t think I’ve ever asked for opinions from other when writing a scene, because when it comes down to it, in the end what I want in my head will take over and do the writing for me. I feel like I should step away and let Marko come to me, but on the other hand I’ve been doing that for several months now and nothing has happened. I suppose I’ll just have to write it as crap now and rewrite it later.

Another Discovery

Posted in The Lost Boys with tags , , , , , , , on August 10, 2011 by markolvr

While I was trying to amp up my Lost Boys writing mojo yesterday by watching clips of the movie on youtube in full screen, I discovered yet another something new. I can’t count the number of times I’ve watched the movie or paused it and played it in slow mo just to see each little reaction the characters have (hey, I didn’t get good at writing them by pretending to know ok) but watching it on the computer is a new thing for me. It feels like I’m apart of more for some reason. Maybe because it’s right there in my face. Well, apparently the same goes for volume as well. I can hear it a lot better on this stupid thing than I can the tv, even with surround sound. Although for a second I thought I was hearing things and I had to replay it. Yes, I’m that crazy.

It’s the famous initiation scene where the boys have a little fun with Mikey’s mind and then serve him the wine. When the chanting of his name starts, if you listen real close, you can hear (I’m assuming it’s Paul and Dwayne because that’s what it sounds like) saying ‘Take a chance, and drink some.’ I thought that was the coolest thing ever! LOL. Maybe others have already heard this?

Now I’m trying to decipher what they are saying at the very beginning (the opening scene as their flying across the ocean) I can hear them talking behind the laughter but so far it’s mumbled. I guess it wouldn’t matter much, but anything that adds character to the characters is like gold to me in stories.

Randomness

Posted in The Lost Boys with tags , , , , , , on July 13, 2011 by markolvr

Hello my friends out there. It’s been awhile, but life as we all know gets rough sometimes. Which means my writing time has been slim to none. It’s really hard for me to have an imagination when I’m stressed, so for now I’m sitting back and letting things come to me as they come, and when they do I write them down. But I’m itching to post some new stuff and finish some old. I miss reviews and I miss talking about our favorite boys. In fact, I’m not sure what’s happened over on ff.net, but I’ve pm’d a few people and haven’t gotten any replies. It could be that they haven’t been on in a while, but I noticed that they’ve changed the format over there so I worry that they haven’t gone through.

Also, I was watching The Lost Boys the other night with the subtitles on to make sure I had Edgar’s lines right just before Nanook shoves Paul in the tub. I was told recently that in their world garlic only works on the vampires when it’s applied with Holy water (according to the so-called second and third movies) I asked the source where they got this information and they said Edgar said so in the first. I had to scratch my head and wonder if, after all these years I had missed something, hence the reason for subtitles. This source thought that Edgar says ‘Try it with Holy water death breath’ and I was sure that he said, ‘Try Holy water death breath.’ It’s actually, ‘Try the Holy water death breath.’ So there, I was right and I call the garlic weapons in the second and third movie fouls. Haha.

Anyway, I ended up watching the last scene in this form and I caught another thing that really surprised me. When David gets the horns through his chest, I always assumed his last word was ‘no’ because that’s what it sounded like, but according to the subtitles he says ‘help!’ I’m not exactly sure why this threw me for a loop, when actually, it only confirms what I’ve felt so strongly about his character all these years. It’s even given me a greater respect for him. I think in that little moment he wasn’t expecting to be caught off guard and when he was all he could do was plead for help from someone who hated him. I’m sure I could come up with the deeper meanings that have been running through my head, but for now I’m keeping it to myself.

On that note, to my friend Laura Dannon, wherever you may be out there, I hope you are well and I miss talking to you terribly.

New song added to the soundtrack list

Posted in The Lost Boys with tags , , , , , on June 16, 2011 by markolvr

Just recently I happened to catch a new song being performed on tv by Katy Perry and at first I thought it was a little odd, but maybe it was more the outfit she was wearing rather than the song itself. The beat, on the other hand, caught my attention and a little later I caught the tail end of it on the radio. I was driving of course and naturally, my imagination took off. The song is called Extraterrestrial and the video refers to an alien of some kind, but I’m going to go out on a limb and say that it could apply to anything of the supernatural sort. Not only that but the lyrics match my boy vamp perfectly. So, I’m adding it to the list as a Serenity/Marko song.

E.T the video

You’re so hypnotizing
Could you be the devil, could you be an angel?
Your touch magnetizing
Feels like I am floating, leaves my body glowing
They say, be afraid!
You’re not like the others, futuristic lover
Different DNA, they don’t understand you
You’re from a whole’nother world
A different dimension
You open my eyes,
And I’m ready to go lead me into the light
Kiss me ki ki kiss me
Infect me with your lovin, fill me with your poison
Take me ta ta take me
Wanna be your victim ready for abduction
Boy boy you’re an alien
Your touch so foreign
It’s supernatural
Extraterrestrial

You’re so supersonic
Wanna feel your powers, stun me with your lasers
Your kiss is cosmic,
every move is magic
You’re from a whole’nother world
A different dimension,
you open my eyes
And I’m ready to go lead me into the light

I love it!

Push Mentality

Posted in The Lost Boys with tags , , , , , on April 18, 2011 by markolvr

Oiy! It’s been a while since I had any story to post, mostly because the motivation was set towards other things. This was actually a dream I had the other night and as I got to thinking about it, I realized that I could fit it into Daria’s scenario. You know, the girl who the boys turned just for fun in Rampant? I know a few people wanted to know what happened to her, so I put her in my place in the dream. Feel free to let me know of any typo’s you might see. :-)

Months after Daria had been forced to drink vampire blood, she found herself trekking across the countryside outside the borders of California, all the while knowing that the monsters were still on her tail in one way or another. But somehow she had managed to resist the terrible cravings and urges that came with being a half. One of her rules to success in this was to avoid human contact as much as possible. So every now and then, she would sneak into a butcher’s shop after they had closed for the day, and gorge on whatever remained from a fresh kill. The animal blood was rancid, and stuck to her fingers and lips in its partially coagulated state, but nevertheless, it sustained her for a little while. Then the pain would come, gnawing and slashing at her gut like a wild animal. That’s when she wished they would find her already and either welcome her into the family or do away with her. Regardless she kept moving from one town to the next, always traveling by night in shadows down sick alleyways that were often filled with garbage and rodents and smelled of urine. She was becoming quite the street rat and it showed. Her dark hair was a greasy mess of tangles that yearned for a brush, and her clothes were soiled and smeared in dirt and blood that had faded to a dark crusty brown. She had even decided to forgo her shoes and walk barefoot through the brittle cement streets. This made for faster movement from possible threats, but deep down, she longed for home. There was also an ache to be with her new brothers. It didn’t matter how far she ran or how long she kept running from them, the connection they now had pulled at her being.

It was a link that often brought one or more of them into her dreams when she slept. For a long time it had been Paul trying to sweet talk her and coax her back to their shores, but after a while he had given up and moved on. Then Marko came. He had become rather fond of her iron will. Never before, he said, had anyone led them on such a chase. He urged her to come back and join the pack, but the lingering fear that it was all a lie kept her on the move.

It was at that point in her travels, weak and weary, that she came across a midnight carnival where freaks and monsters alike appeared welcome. They had set up an outrageous stadium covered in the heavy white tent material most circus rings are made of and she watched with interest as people flooded into it by the thousands. No way, she thought to herself, could all of them fit, but still, they continued to filter through the heavy burlap flap of an opening. This piqued her curiosity and she tiptoed stealthily across the grass to follow the last person through the entrance. To her amazement, the grandstands inside spread across the entire length of the ring, making it appear much larger than it looked from the outside. It was the length of a football field at least and in the sharp little corner by the bleachers, she could see the crowd extending past the walls of the giant dome as though it were all an illusion. There were horses in the circle as well; big, sturdy drafts with flowing feathers on their feet as they paraded around and tilted their heads to show off the wavy red plumage that decorated the space in between their ears. But when the ringmaster appeared, Daria felt a cold chill embrace her and suddenly she was in the spotlight. She quickly realized that the man was no man, but a vampire, quite complex and very old in the scheme of things. She understood this right away by the way his presence loomed over everything and everyone, and he had picked up her scent. With the slightest of movements he spotted her, and his mind beckoned her out of the cramped little corner she had hid herself in.

It was powerful. It pulled her out like a puppet on strings and step by cautious step brought her out to the center. The lights burned her eyes as she squinted up at the stranger before her. His dark, bushy eyebrows knitted together forming a frown that shadowed his face with foreboding, even as he took a large step forward and leapt into the air. She watched with odd fascination as his body climbed the invisible rope higher and higher until as if by some strange magic, he held one of the horses mid-air in his arms. The gallant steed reared, striking the air in anger. She could see the black feathers that adorned his fetlocks and the outline of the underside of his hooves before he was released and plummeted straight towards her. She was frozen in her stance, unable to tear her eyes away. But as the animal drew closer, she realized it was not a horse at all, but the man. He wore black velvet robes and dark furs, and his hair was long and black, covering the countenance of his face until he was so close, she could see his wicked smile. His brown eyes glistened in delight as his fangs descended and Daria felt compelled to accept him. For whatever reason, she found herself tilting her head to welcome the bite she knew was coming. She felt his arms around her, and his kiss deep even as she instinctively shielded the small nook under her jaw in order to guide him to a place where she couldn’t imagine her life’s entire blood spewing out.

The bite itself was delicious, seductive and warm. It caused her to lose grip of reality as she tried to blink away the sleeping spell he drove into her mind. It was a dirty trick indeed and when she woke up, she found herself clean and dressed in the style of a modern-day preppy schoolgirl. The mini skirt that hugged her hips was a navy blue, the blouse a perfect white, and all the tangles had been combed out of her hair. No longer did the gleaming circus of freaks fall before her. Instead, she found herself in another strange little town just outside a school in complete daylight. Only this school didn’t consist of just one big building, it had many, petite in size and they were all the same color of off white. The place struck her as old-fashioned as well because the road leading in was nothing but dirt, as were all the paths in between that led to each classroom, and she could see some of its students lingering here and there. A group of three caught her eye and she knew right away that they were like her, only half. They carried books under their arms and mischievous smiles on their faces.

She didn’t have much time to study them before a hand grabbed her from behind and pulled her with urgency inside one of the buildings.

“Quickly, quickly,” the voice said, slamming the door shut, making sure to bolt each of the three locks.

There were two people in this particular room, both without the slightest trace of vampire on their blood and both elderly. Daria got the impression that they were teachers here in this bizarre little town and she watched as the woman huddled down next to one of the windows. They were opaque, created in a milky white color that gave the impression of plastic and it troubled her that she couldn’t see through any of them. Each was designed to let the light of day in and keep whatever was lurking on the outside out.

“You don’t want to be around when those three are about,” the old man told her.

She didn’t say anything, but hunkered down and backed away as the windows began to rattle. As she turned and slipped away from the ruckus, she found that the back of the room sloped a bit downwards and instead of ending in a wall, ran it’s course straight through into a narrow hallway that seemed to slip underground. The darkness of it felt a lot more comforting than the sun up front causing crazy commotion and chaos for two senior teachers.

At the end of the hallway, she entered a large room with high vaulted ceilings and right in the middle sat a fireplace. To the right there was another hallway that contained many classrooms by the looks of it and to the left a gigantic lobby full of tables and chairs and comforting couches. The half vampires that lingered here seemed a bit more at peace than the ones above ground did, as they conversed with one another. A few looked in her direction, barely acknowledging her presence, but the question on Daria’s mind remained the same. Why had the strange ringmaster brought her there? Or maybe she was dreaming again?

Her mind moved to get out of dodge, but her body simply wouldn’t obey as she climbed aboard one of the plush leather couches, tucking her knees up and against her chest to huddle there. For once since the entire nightmare had begun she wished she were back in Santa Carla amongst the sinister rock and roll vampires that had so carelessly pushed her in-between worlds. She closed her eyes and shoved her head between her knees as another bought of hunger struck her. Could it be possible that this place had a cafeteria with a vampire’s diet in mind?

“I know what she needs,” a familiar voice sounded from behind.

She looked up to see Marko enter the room with the other boys in tow right behind him, and oh how glad she was to see him even as the familiar fear of them crept into her body.

“I’ll dangle it in front her,” he was telling the others, “until her instincts take over and she can’t resist any longer.” He held a gloved hand out to her as she peeked up at him through her folded arms, and finally took it, slipping off the couch to stand for one second before he turned and led her down the hallway and into one of the classrooms. There were many boxes and empty shelves in this one. It wasn’t much to look at, just one of those old abandoned storage rooms full of cobwebs and dust. There was one thing, however that set this room apart from the others.

Marko had used it to store the bait for her and there it was, the only bright thing in the room made of soft flesh and tissue, bones and blood; the torso of a man. Her new vampire mentor had taken the liberty of filleting the subjects back like some expensive steak so that she could smell him all the better, but the sight of it was brutal and her mouth watered even as her eyes were repulsed. The thick layer of flesh across the back had been stripped away so that she could see every fiber in the man’s muscles and the outline of the bones that made up his ribcage. He was headless as well with no legs. Of course this wasn’t going to count as her first kill, it didn’t work that way, no, this was just an introductory lesson on how to eat right, one that she had been missing for too long.

Marko stepped forward and put a hard fist through one set of ribs, pulling a few off with ease. She could see the soft, fresh marrow on the inside of them as he offered the pair to her. “Think of them as potato chips,” he smiled.

Why that made everything she was about to do better she had no idea, but the meal was hers and she dove in, ripping the meaty bones from his hands like a ravenous lioness. Her teeth cut right through the calcium rich density and oddly enough, she found the texture just like crunching down on a few potato chips. The marrow was custard and the blood rich, oh yes; this was the stuff dreams were made of. She would kill a dozen times over if it meant getting a treat such as this. She watched Marko from the corner of her eye as she feasted. He stood proud with a devilish smile on his face, hands clasped in satisfaction.

She stopped eating and looked around. There was no cluttered, filthy room surrounding her, just heavy rocks and boulders moistened by the onslaught of seawater deep somewhere within the cave. She could smell the salt and hear the waves crashing in all around them. It had been a dream, a mind illusion and a bizarre one at that, but it worked. Somewhere in-between sleep and awake he had scooped her up in the night and taken her back. How clever.

“Welcome home Daria,” he whispered.

Mind Lull

Posted in The Lost Boys with tags , , , , , on March 1, 2011 by markolvr

Hello my friends,

I hate to admit it’s been over a week and there isn’t another short story up…boo. Sadly, I’ve had other things going on that have distracted me from my imagination, although I have been working on DU here and there. Hopefully the next chapter will be up within the next week or two. I guess my muse decided to step out on me in terms of writing, which happens and sometimes it’s nice to take a little break. I have pictures I want to post as well, but they will be posted on my other blog since they’re not exactly related to the Lost Boys. No worries, I’m still here. In the meantime, how about a movie fact? I’m sure most of you already know a lot of the trivia, but ah well. It’s fun anyway.

‘The merry-go-round sequence foreshadows the order in which the Lost Boys die. Marko dies first, Paul second, Dwayne third and David last.’

OOh, how’s that for square? :-) All in reverse order of course, which actually doesn’t make a whol lot of sense to me, haha.

I Would Give You Evening Light

Posted in The Lost Boys with tags , , , , on February 16, 2011 by markolvr

Written in drabble form, even though each one is not a complete story. I’ve never done this before and I wanted it to be a little like poetry. The boys in the beginning are thoughtforms brought to life by the mind of this girl.

The night falls heavy on her mind, filled with restless anticipation and a hunger that’s never satisfied. Her own doing no doubt. The creations of her mind now running wild, doing as they please, yet always with a promised return to torment and tease her soul. They feed her appetite but leave it empty in the morning light, yearning for more. The darkness is her ally, the sun her God and she is torn between the two. A heavy burden to carry, always devout, tainted by evil. She can see no malice in them, not now after all these years.

Always kind. Always gracious. Always protective. The gifts given in their birth. They hide the threatening side well. Given but an inch to breath and all would be revealed. It’s temptation to free the beast. Let them show their true nature. Let them be free from this considerable mind. At what cost? She has no life to spare, but would give it all for one real glance. A life form tried and true. Drink of me, she says, and I will be yours, if only I could see you. The shadows dance, her will is thrown like countless times before.

One of respect emerges. The understanding seeps from his clasped hands. She sees him look upon her, a silver gleam in the blue of his eyes. Old friends. The faint sound of music far away. How long before they become that distant? He tilts his head. Silly girl, you should know better. Family, by blood or no. Even when I’m old? She wants to know. What will his answer be tonight? Her security comes with the death of another. For there is always a price for a love as dark as this. Yes David. He preaches like a trained scholar.

She doesn’t care, rather, she likes his teachings. Was it a gift from her mind? Something she needed deep down. He smiles. There can be no doubt, for other things just as black roam through troubled minds. Her thoughts must be pure until the chain is broken. It is a fear filled road. One of great worth in her eyes given the many nights of blood filled passion. The wait has been long enough. The invitation is open and complete. Not just to him, but to his brothers as well. Energy sought to bring them forth will diminish her own.

To have and to hold. It was right from the start. Marko. He will be there to collect her in his arms when the time comes, monster or no. His appetite is growing. Her ideas see to that. The wicked side of him clawing to get out. David insists it will be ok. He has a plan. She can see the gadgets in his head twisting, turning, working it out. An eye for an eye. Be one of us, the time has come. It is a master plan. Blood of your blood, blood of my blood. His offer stands firm.

Will the world spin out of control? She wonders. What will happen to her family? Will there be hell on Earth? Will she go to hell? Who would have thought the power of the mind could be so fulfilling. She knows what she wants. No denying it now. I will bring you the sun and let you see it through my eyes, the way I have seen it, and I will give your evening light. She steps forward, wrist bare, her mind racing. It seeks the vampire, pushes it. Her heart drums against her chest, frightful of the beast there.

His eyes flash her with a dark fire, fangs peaking from concealed lips. Concentration on her part is vital. One slip and they’ll both be gone. Her offer of flesh is imminent. Gloved hands slip into fixed positions, gripping the delicate hand and wrist, careful not to cause pain. Her eyes shut, even as she watches. The feel of cold lips finally gracing the small veins. Just a pinch, he promises, nothing more. A small blood donation to make the transformation complete. A prick of pain, a searing heat. No vivid dream could compare to this reality. At long last.

The time for thought is over. One large breath is all she is allowed before an icy wrist is pressed to her own mouth. The copper, metallic taste digs into her lips forcing a taste even before they are parted. Her body sings, feeling its power and her legs stagger. He holds her, a desperate urgency in the grasp. She feels it and latches on, suckling like a newborn. The heavy elixir deadens her heart and mentality. His blood runs in waves through her with each gulp. A constant throb of life and death. Finally she breaks the heavy connection.

His form stands proud as her eyes wander, adjusting to the new life of darkness. Every sweet sound different from the other and yet troubling. Her psyche lock on him is no more. He is…they are of their own existence. A sudden warmth rolls over her in the cold night air. Something once long-lost and longed for is now forever hers. The creator has now become the created. It is a price well paid. Your prize, milady. David gestures, beckoning to the shadows with one extended limb. She watches with wild exhilaration, her heart quick regardless of new blood.

I’ve been waiting for you. His figure emerges, eyes of sea blue a glow even in the blackness. Behind him, his brothers. Paul. Dwayne. Their eyes are filled with welcome, hers flooded with tears of joy. Marko can hold off no more and they embrace. It is long past due from all the nights of shared desire from afar. The electricity between them causes the stars in the heavens to spark and crack. Mouth to mouth, lips to lips. She has found her calling. The pressure of giving them life no more. A new existence with love at her side.

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